She Writes

well, all i can manage to do (if its allowed :]) is to **ECHO** all the comments everyone here has posted. they all help you!! ~B aka Courtney aka JuSt ...

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I love this! I like the whole thing. What else can I say? *aplause*

I wanna critique, but everyone has covered it. This was a really nice poem!!! Great job. xxx

Hey, Guys-- You all said I needed to explain what happened to the mother. I thought it would be different to have the reader, like, infer or whatever. I dont ...

Loved it! Very suspenseful. :P Good Job! Oh, didn't read part II. Too long! I am chatting with you now. Buh-Bye! Imagine